Our Secret Place

by Christopher Louie

PROLOGUE

The speaker reflects on a cherished secret place shared with their lover, a once magical location where their love flourished and dreams were exchanged. This place symbolized happiness and connection, filled with beauty, intimacy, and shared secrets. It was a sanctuary that allowed them to escape the real world and celebrate their bond. However, with the lover’s departure, this enchanting space has become a bittersweet memory, lost to time yet forever etched in the speaker’s heart. The nostalgia encapsulates both the joy of their shared experiences and the sorrow of loss, highlighting the fragility of love and cherished moments.


Our Secret Place

There’s a secret place,
where true love awaits;
It’s a place where fairy tales come true.
It is where we go,
to leave the world we know;
A special place just for me and you.

 

This world is magical and vast,
its beauty unsurpassed;
A land of luxury and everlasting bliss.
Everything there looks incredible,
it’s where I’d put you on a pedestal,
a place where your charm is hard to resist.

 

The lands are full of treasures
where we are rooted in pleasures;
It’s where you’d take me to get away.
The air smells of your perfume,
where flowers are forever bloomed,
it’s a place I could perpetually stay.

 

It’s where you’d kiss my face,
while our fingers are interlaced,
where we’d talk to each other about our dreams.
It’s where we share our secrets,
where every night is sleepless,
where we stay awake forever it seems.

 

This is where we leave behind
our worries, concerns of all kinds,
and just revel in each other’s company.
This is where you once said you loved me,
and that we were meant to be,
where you whispered many words laced with honey.

 

But that place is now gone
ever since you’ve moved on
when you took your love away from me.
But I will always miss
that place that now exists
only in my heart and memories.

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